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Well

It did alright, mostly because of it's loose affiliation with a moral cause. Otherwise, it was just giggle worthy. Nothing special. Good effort.

Oh lord

I loved the style. This was just F'ing hilarious. It was adorable when he smiled at the end. Thought that was just the icing on the cake. I'm still laughing. Excellent work. :)

Well then

Nothing exceptional, probably because of the length. The subtlety probably won't catch on to most people who have no idea what the series is. Either way, good idea and it stinks of potential. Was this an actual advertisement of a longer more thorough look at what him rolling through a room is about?

Sounds like..

Something that came off of a Manson track off of "Mechanical Animals". In fact, it's suspiciously TOO alike. Not sure if thats intentional or not, it would be nice to work off of in a band setting but other than that. Not much you could do with this. Record what you did with this with the band, maybe it'll prove to me that I know nothing. Let's hope.

STOP playing with the ambience

This just confused the hell outta me. It sounds like an ill man in the background trying to give a speech, hungover. Eh..musically, I can't say much, just sounds like various noises put over..this..man who seems sick. Save the man, quickly.

Emm..

Sounds like you were just goofing off with the piano, decided to make it your 'melody' and added some synth progression over top. Alrighty then. Background percussion is just kind of noisy. Repetitive and somewhat dull. Not much potential in this piece.